OKOK. moshing_nekkid told me "do it!", and so I shall.
But it IS still under revision. AND this IS just the opening.
There she was. Sweaty, dirty, bruised, and bleeding. And she held herself regally. She looked dainty, very feminine. Yet she looked as if she could kill you with out a second thought. She had sleek red hair, pale skin, and freckles. Short and scrawny, but with a sense of strength radiating around her. Even from across the room he could feel it. She stood infront of Bruce, the head of security, animatedly describing something. And from the large vein protruding from the back of his neck, he obviously didn't enjoy what he was hearing.
She was explaining the reasion why she de-balled a guy.
"Look here you great baboon! What I did," she made a frustrated groan. "THE MORON HAD IT COMING TO HIM!"
"And you look here, miss. Just because this guy," he motined to a pale guy in the corner, holding his balls, "insulted your friend, doesn't give you any right to sock him in the balls."
"I'm sorry your great baboon-ness," she said in a mocking tone and a bow to go with it. "But when someone calls any woman a 'stupid white bitch' I believe I have to retailiate. ESPECIALLY when said person is my best friend, and comes bawling to me because the idiot over there hit her too."
"Even if that is so, you can't go around nailing every guy you see in the nuts," he replied, exasperated.
"That's not true. I haven't kncoked yours off yet. But believe me, I am VERY tempted."
He laughed. She had knocked a guy in the sack because he had insulted her friend. He had to meet her. Deciding to take over, he approached them.
"Bruce is there a problem?"
Holy. Shit. That was THE sex god. Tré Cool Standing right infront of her. WIthin reaching distance. God, how she wanted to rape him.
God-I hate how this doesn't let you tab anything, and how it doubles the sentences. But besides that. Questions ,comments, snide remarks?